Yes, the use of enjambement with the conjunction creates a sense of anticipation, but also sets up the parallelism as seen with the repeated use of 'my'. Then again, it's written by someone with the mental age of a five year old.
I find that the staccato use of single-syllable words in relation to the recurring themes of ownership and power relations (My boss, My work, my money etc) creates a powerful sense of resentment in their employment, let down by the fact that the poem is complete and utter shit.
For added pretension, note my use of the French enjambement. Compare with caesura. The hanging conjunction and lack of punctuation does create a momentary suspense. Or the typesetter was a twit and just centred everything. Where's my gin?
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Yes, the use of enjambement with the conjunction creates a sense of anticipation, but also sets up the parallelism as seen with the repeated use of 'my'. Then again, it's written by someone with the mental age of a five year old.
8:08pm
Fascinating... I had read it as if the forth line started with 'But'...
8:14pm
Between caption and comments, I only understood gin.
8:17pm
I find that the staccato use of single-syllable words in relation to the recurring themes of ownership and power relations (My boss, My work, my money etc) creates a powerful sense of resentment in their employment, let down by the fact that the poem is complete and utter shit.
8:18pm
For added pretension, note my use of the French enjambement. Compare with caesura. The hanging conjunction and lack of punctuation does create a momentary suspense. Or the typesetter was a twit and just centred everything. Where's my gin?
8:18pm
I'm drinking it.
8:40pm
Pete - I laughed loads at your comment
MW - laughed even more at your last comment
Hilarious haha
10:05pm
Yes Tony is right. Only named captioneers get served gin 😊
6:47am
Thanks... think I need some black coffee.
6:52am