You're right that your wording is a tad more common. Not that I did it consciously, but leaning on "between" as the first word helps the mildly-amusing pivot; the placing of that word maybe made it work, slightly. Now, "the frog is dead," if there ever was one - between you and me : )
But I'm always up for a good dissection. Thanks you!
...and I could solve it by just taking out "just"...but that would cut down on the buildup, the suspense. There goes my relaxing Sunday! Can anyone help us settle this?
I think the build and the pivot are both stronger with "Just between you and me," because you're leading us in the direction of a confidential secret between the two of them, then the pivot makes it universal.
You know what, I think you're right. Starting with "just" deepens the meaning, instead of confusing it. I just changed it. Thanks folks! You salvaged the rest of my Sunday!
Isn't it ... "just between you and me... ?"
12:28pm
You're right that your wording is a tad more common. Not that I did it consciously, but leaning on "between" as the first word helps the mildly-amusing pivot; the placing of that word maybe made it work, slightly. Now, "the frog is dead," if there ever was one - between you and me : )
But I'm always up for a good dissection. Thanks you!
12:50pm
...and I could solve it by just taking out "just"...but that would cut down on the buildup, the suspense. There goes my relaxing Sunday! Can anyone help us settle this?
12:56pm
Hey, between you and me, there is anyone and everyone...haha.
1:47pm
I think the build and the pivot are both stronger with "Just between you and me," because you're leading us in the direction of a confidential secret between the two of them, then the pivot makes it universal.
2:33pm
You know what, I think you're right. Starting with "just" deepens the meaning, instead of confusing it. I just changed it. Thanks folks! You salvaged the rest of my Sunday!
2:54pm